My partner and I read Kafka’s “Before
the Law” as having a formalist critical approach. We chose this approach because
we were a bit confused on what the text was about or who the man and gatekeeper
were, making it difficult to choose a critical approach. We thought of the
reading and the whole interaction between the man and the gatekeeper as being
something related to sin or a higher power vs man. Sin came to mind because it
appeared as though the man was being punished throughout the whole story. He
was not being allowed through the gate, but it was unclear why or what was needed
to get through. The gatekeeper reminded me of a God, and my partner and I agreed
that word choice such as “gatekeeper,” “illumination,” and “diminishing” offered
a fairy tale-like reading and could also be read as a children’s story based on its
structure. However, if thought of as punishment, the gatekeeper would read more
as a devil/dark figure and not a God or figure of light. If read as a children’s
story, the story could then appear to have a lesson behind it, possibly with religious
ties to it as well. It reminds me of a story one would hear at a Catholic Elementary
School, or a story read to children during Sunday church. Regardless, it is
clear the gatekeeper is superior and holds all power.
The reading, in structure, is one
large text rather than being broken up into paragraphs, making for a much less
formal structure. It reads as a story meant to entertain rather than having a
deeper meaning and meant to make the audience think about hierarchies within
society because it is so open-ended. The heavy use of dialogue throughout the text
also offers a fiction short story-feel to it, emphasizing the fairy tale reading
created by the narrator’s diction. However, when analyzing the dialogue and
tone of the story, one could read it as also having a Marxist approach. This
would take into consideration the unequal economic and power divisions created
by higher authority with the gatekeeper being the one in charge, and the man
pleading to be let past the gate. The entire time, the gatekeeper has a dominating
tone and is clearly aware of his power within his role.
Depending on how we were
interpreting it, the gatekeeper could also be read as representing any figures
of authority such as police officers and government officials working against
marginalized groups of color. When reading this from a Marxist approach, one
could think of the gatekeeper as representing those who dominate our own
society: rich white men. The man, then, becomes those belonging to marginalized
groups of color, or simply even anyone who doesn’t identify as a wealthy white
man. At some point in the story, the gatekeeper states that the only one truly
in the way of the man was the man himself, as the entry was created solely for
him. This can read as lower-class groups being told they will remain poor because
that is the way it was meant to be. This could also read as people of color
being told they are not trying hard enough or using their resources wisely to
get out of the poor living conditions they are under. Being judged for
continuing to live under poor conditions or barely making enough to get by and
then being told it is your own fault, is the same tone the gatekeeper was using
towards the man. It is evident that the gatekeeper feels superior to the man
and views the man as foolish for being unable to get through, telling him: “Here
no one else can gain entry, since this entrance was assigned only to you. I’m
going now to close it” (Kafka). The gatekeeper acknowledges how simple it was
for him to tell the man this information yet continues to make him feel
inferior by so carelessly closing the gate.
I believe the Marxist approach is
the most useful because it focuses on the injustices of the story and can be
used to tell a story of dominant cultures. Even if viewed as a children’s
story, it is clear that the man was being treated unfairly and should have been
let past the gate since the beginning. The Marxist approach allows for critique
of dominant society in all aspects of culture and works to dismantle the hierarchies
created by ruling classes. Many may argue that readers cannot make such bold
assumptions based solely off an ambiguous story; however, not knowing what
living under oppressive societies and figures of power is like means it is
unfair to dismiss the Marxist approach as less useful/convincing.
I enjoyed your analysis and how you acknowledge your trouble identifying this as a matter of Heaven and Hell. This shows you were working through potential arguments and identifying based on the presentation of the text. However, there seems to be a lack of textual evidence. I see you are working through the text, but quotes will provide evidence and a place of reference.
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ReplyDeleteI really liked your analysis and the biblical illusions that you were able to pull from the text through the formalist method. In addition, your second analysis of the work by utilizing a Marxist technique was also interesting to read due to the separation of class structures that you presented. However, I would advise for more citations from the text for the reader to gain a clearer picture of your analysis. I would love to know what aspects of the text led itself to being read through the lens of lower classes vying for support from the law. Overall, I really enjoyed it and thought that the Marixst lens was very provoking!